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:iconpreciousmiseries:
ya...remember when they said they were making a cowboy bebop movie well someone took some pics to see what it'd look like and um..i hope like god it doesnt look like this. [link]
:iconstregian:
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:iconletter-lplz::iconletter-oplz::iconletter-lplz: XD He looks so fucking ridiculous!
:iconpreciousmiseries:
ya i know right......faints x___X
:iconpreciousmiseries:
Hey ^_^ I found my old poem/story account. i was wondering what you thought of my old and new writeing please give it a look and tell me what you think [link] :D
:iconstregian:
Uh, why don't you link me two stories, one old and one new, for me to compare to. Reading all the stories would take me a while since I usually have only so much time to devote to that sort of thing.
:iconpreciousmiseries:
this one was my first one [link] and this one was my newest [link] i hope you like them ^_^ rmember i was a emo goth kid when i made my oldest when i made my newest i was still dark but not as emo. lol xD
:iconstregian:
There is a better flow for the newest one which does show progress. I would suggest using language that was more surprising or inspiring emotions, painting vivid images through simple phrasing. But there is progress from the first work to the next, surely. Without the pointing out 'this one is new' and 'this one is old' one can already feel the maturing of the writer and the development of her craft.
:iconpreciousmiseries:
really yay i show progress. aww thank you so much. ^_^ *glows* hehe i feel like i got the highest pharse from a most respectable person in the usa. :D *bows* :)
:iconf1ymordecai:
:D thanks for the fav! :cuddle:
:iconwrinrulez:
i know i almost cried haha
:iconstregian:
XD I admit, with some shame, that I got drunk (due to grief at the thought of his death) and then was almost too hammered to fully appreciate he was actually alive at the end. LOL

I was like 'It's Charles....or....a drunken hallucination. Ether way, LOOK CHARLES!'
:iconwrinrulez:
haha yes and he was back in a sexy leather jacket for some reason xD
:iconstregian:
And the hair! I think it was the hair that startled me the most. Very...touchable. Puuur.
:iconwrinrulez:
ah yes haha so scruffy. The scar too(; although i must admit i was a little relieved when i saw him in the suit and glasses again haha

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